shrinking
dying out of face
you’ve come along
with your smile and taste
there’s no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me

I'd like to be u


"a" should be deleted.

I'd also put "shrinking" in one line.

anyway, I love the poem.

thx

dean pisze:shrinking
dying out of face
you’ve come along
with your smile and taste
there’s no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me

Ah, a little unruly puppy didn't get a sweet?

no sweets again :(

I'd like to be you

doubtful

Too heavy to catch irony?

too dumb :)