whenever I touch my separateness
the earth becomes like a balloon filled with helium

lila pisze:whenever I touch separateness of mine
the earth becomes like a balloon filled with helium

Now you have syllabic verse

it's not a poem it's just a sentence but here in english forum there's no special place for such short things

to touch a separatness? is that an idiom or that means that "lyrical subject" feels like an isolated/alienated person? or is it "individual thinking of being close to reality or anybody besides "self""?

OK... so earth/world/reality has its funny-dimension?

is it a sentence after smoking marihuana?

whenever the ego reality is separate from the self, however colourful it may be, it is empty,like an inflated balloon, a form without substance, like an eagle drawn on the snow...


did I get it ?

whenever i become concious of my separateness , whenever I fell that my road belongs to me and nobody else, that the footprints that I leave are my, whenever I feel undependend of other people I feel freedom - (feel like a baloon filled with helium= which is not ruled in this special example. by the gravitation) //whatever,sorry for mistakes i m a little bit f** up)
yin its not empt baloon it is baloon with something that enables to fly , its a pity that this feeling comes so seldom ...

lila pisze:whenever i become concious of my separateness , whenever I fell that my road belongs to me and nobody else, that the footprints that I leave are my, whenever I feel undependend of other people I feel freedom - (feel like a baloon filled with helium= which is not ruled in this special example. by the gravitation) //whatever,sorry for mistakes i m a little bit f** up)
yin its not empt baloon it is baloon with something that enables to fly , its a pity that this feeling comes so seldom ...

Now you have soliptic rapture