if I were a painter
I would paint red flowers
and you naked
dancing among them
with your hair flying
if I sang
in another language
because I flatten in my own
I would sing
what is on the painting
if I said
what I think
I would tell you
recite songs
if I loved
just like you do
I would say to you
fuck off
erekcjato crap 36
Moderator: Margot
fobiak i think that you are aware of it tha this is not the erekcjato , becouse you didn't write the end of the first main text
maybe it could be in this way:
if I loved
just like you do
I would talk with you
All day
about fucking*
Nevertheless , in my opinion this is very good poem .
[ Dodano: 2007-01-24, 14:21 ]
ouh.. fuck! :)
but I have sawn in the labolatory that it isnt your text but dean's one...
maybe it could be in this way:
if I loved
just like you do
I would talk with you
All day
about fucking*
Nevertheless , in my opinion this is very good poem .
[ Dodano: 2007-01-24, 14:21 ]
ouh.. fuck! :)
but I have sawn in the labolatory that it isnt your text but dean's one...
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